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 %% Abstract
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   The era of big data has ushered an era of big responsibility.
-  In the absence of reproducibility, as a test on the reported data lineage, the result's integrity will be subject to perpetual debate.
+  In the absence of reproducibility, as a test on understanding data lineage, the result will be subject to perpetual debate.
   To address this problem, we introduce Maneage (management + lineage) which has already been tested and used in several scientific papers.
-  Maneage is founded on the principles of completeness (e.g., no dependency beyond a POSIX-compatible operating system, no administrator privileges, or no network connection), modular and straight-forward design, temporal lineage and free software, to enable precise reproducibility.
-  The Maneage lineage, or workflow, is in machine\--action\-able, and human\--read\-able, plain-text format, facilitating version-control, publication, archival, or automatic parsing to extract data provenance.
-  The lineage is not limited to high-level processing, but also includes building the necessary software from source with fixed versions and build configurations.
+  Maneage is founded on the principles of completeness (e.g., no dependency beyond a POSIX-compatible operating system, no administrator privileges, or no network connection), modular and straight-forward design, temporal lineage and free software.
+  A project using Maneage is fully stored in in machine\--action\-able, and human\--read\-able, plain-text format, facilitating version-control, publication, archival, or automatic parsing to extract data provenance.
+  The provided lineage is not limited to high-level processing, but also includes building the necessary software from source with fixed versions and build configurations.
   Additionally, the project's final visualizations and narrative report are also included, establishing direct, and parse-able, links between the data analysis and the narrative or plots, with the precision of a word in a sentence or a point in a plot.
   Maneage enables incremental projects, where a new project can branch off an existing one, with moderate changes to enable experimentation on published methods.
   Once Maneage is implemented in a sufficiently wide scale, it can aid in automatic and optimized workflow creation through machine learning, or automating data management plans.
-  Maneage was a recipient of the research data alliance (RDA) Europe Adoption Grant in 2019.
-  This paper is itself written in Maneage with snapshot \projectversion.
+  Maneage was a recipient of the research data alliance (RDA) Europe Adoption Grant in 2019 and is also used to write this paper, with snapshot \projectversion.
   \horizontalline
 
   \noindent
@@ -79,21 +78,19 @@
 \label{sec:introduction}
 
 The increasing volume and complexity of data analysis has been highly productive, giving rise to a new branch of ``Big Data'' in many fields of the sciences and industry.
-However, given its inherent complexity, the mere results are barely useful alone.
-Questions such as these commonly follow any such result:
+However, given its inherent complexity, the mere results are barely useful alone, questions on its lineage/provenance these commonly follow:
 What inputs were used?
-What operations were done on those inputs? How were the configurations or training data chosen?
-How did the quantitative results get visualized into the final demonstration plots, figures or narrative/qualitative interpretation?
-May there be a bias in the visualization?
+How were the configurations or training data chosen?
+What operations were done on those inputs, how were the plots made?
 See Figure \ref{fig:questions} for a more detailed visual representation of such questions for various stages of the workflow.
 \tonote{Johan: add some general references.}
 
-In data science and database management, this type of metadata are commonly known as \emph{data provenance}, and the lower-level implementation is \emph{data lineage} (for more on the definitions, see Section \ref{sec:definitions}).
-Data lineage is being increasingly demanded for integrity checking from both the scientific and industrial/legal domains.
-Notable examples in each domain are respectively the ``Reproducibility crisis'' in the sciences that was claimed by the Nature journal \citep{baker16}, and the General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) by the European Parliament and the California Consumer Privacy Act (CCPA), implemented in 2018 and 2020 respectively.
-The former argues that reproducibility (as a test on sufficiently conveying the data lineage) is necessary for other scientists to study, check and build-upon each other's work.
-The latter requires the data intensive industry to give individual users control over their data, effectively requiring thorough management and knowledge of the data's lineage.
-Besides regulation and integrity checks, having a robust data governance (management of data lineage) in a project can be very productive: it enables easy debugging, experimentation on alternative methods, or optimization of the workflow.
+Due to the complexity of modern data analysis, a small deviation in the final result can be due to many different steps, which may be significant.
+Publishing the \emph{complete} codes of the analysis is the only way to avoid wasting resources.
+For example, \citet{smart18} describes how a 7-year old conflict in theoretical condensed matter physics was only identified after the relative codes were shared.
+\citet{miller06} found a mistaken column flipping in a project's workflow, leading to retraction of 5 papers in major journals, including Science.
+\citet{baggerly09} highlighted the inadequate narrative description of the analysis and showed the prevalence of simple errors in published results, ultimately calling their work ``forensic bioinformatics''.
+\citet{herndon14} and \citet[a self-correction]{horvath15} also reported similar situations and \citet{ziemann16} concluded that one-fifth of papers with supplementary Microsoft Excel gene lists contain erroneous gene name conversions.
 
 \begin{figure}[t]
   \begin{center}
@@ -103,27 +100,16 @@ Besides regulation and integrity checks, having a robust data governance (manage
   \caption{\label{fig:questions}Graph of a generic project's workflow (connected through arrows), highlighting the various issues/questions on each step.
     The green boxes with sharp edges are inputs and the blue boxes with rounded corners are the intermediate or final outputs.
     The red boxes with dashed edges highlight the main questions on the respective stage.
-    The orange box surrounding the software download and build phases marks shows the various commonly recognized solutions to the questions in it, for more see Appendix \ref{appendix:jobmanagement}.
+    The box coverting the software download and build phases shows some common tools software developers use for that phase, but a scientific project is so much more than that.
   }
 \end{figure}
 
-Due to the complexity of modern data analysis, a small deviation in the final result can be due to many different steps, which may be significant.
-Publishing the precise codes of the analysis is the only guarantee.
-For example, \citet{smart18} describes how a 7-year old conflict in theoretical condensed matter physics was only identified after the relative codes were shared.
-Nature is already a black box which we are trying hard to unlock, or understand.
-Not being able to experiment on the methods of other researchers is an artificial and self-imposed black box, wrapped over the original, and taking most of the energy of researchers.
-
-\citet{miller06} found a mistaken column flipping in a project's workflow, leading to retraction of 5 papers in major journals, including Science.
-\citet{baggerly09} highlighted the inadequate narrative description of the analysis and showed the prevalence of simple errors in published results, ultimately calling their work ``forensic bioinformatics''.
-\citet{herndon14} and \citet[a self-correction]{horvath15} also reported similar situations and \citet{ziemann16} concluded that one-fifth of papers with supplementary Microsoft Excel gene lists contain erroneous gene name conversions.
-The reason such reports are mostly from genomics and bioinformatics is because they have traditionally been more open to publishing workflows: for example \href{https://www.myexperiment.org}{myexperiment.org}, which mostly uses Apache Taverna \citep{oinn04}, or \href{https://www.genepattern.org}{genepattern.org} \citep{reich06}, \href{https://galaxyproject.org}{galaxy\-project.org} \citep{goecks10}, among others.
+The reason such reports are mostly from genomics and bioinformatics is because they have traditionally been more open to publishing workflows: for example \href{https://www.myexperiment.org}{myexperiment.org}, or \href{https://www.genepattern.org}{genepattern.org}, \href{https://galaxyproject.org}{galaxy\-project.org}, and others.
 Such integrity checks are a critical component of the scientific method, but are only possible with access to the data \emph{and} its lineage (workflows).
-The status in other fields were workflows are not commonly shared is probably (much) worse.
-
-The completeness of a paper's published metadata (or ``Methods'' section) can be measured by a simple question: given the same input datasets (supposedly on a third-party database like \href{http://zenodo.org}{zenodo.org}), can another researcher reproduce the exact same result automatically, without needing to contact the authors?
-Several studies have attempted to answer this with different levels of detail.
-For example, \citet{allen18} found that roughly half of the papers in astrophysics do not even mention the names of any analysis software they have used, while \citet{menke20} found this fraction has greatly improved in medical/biological journals over the last two decades (currently above $80\%$).
+The status in other fields, where workflows are not commonly shared, is probably (much!) worse.
 
+The completeness of a paper's published metadata (or ``Methods'' section) can be measured by the ability reproduce the result without needing to contact the authors.
+Several studies have attempted to answer this with different levels of detail, for example, \citet{allen18} found that roughly half of the papers in astrophysics do not even mention the names of any analysis software, while \citet{menke20} found this fraction has greatly improved in medical/biological field and is currently above $80\%$.
 \citet{ioannidis2009} attempted to reproduce 18 published results by two independent groups but only fully succeeded in 2 of them and partially in 6.
 \citet{chang15} attempted to reproduce 67 papers in well-regarded economic journals with data and code: only 22 could be reproduced without contacting authors, and more than half could not be replicated at all.
 \citet{stodden18} attempted to replicate the results of 204 scientific papers published in the journal Science \emph{after} that journal adopted a policy of publishing the data and code associated with the papers.
@@ -138,11 +124,6 @@ While the situation has improved since the early 1990s, these papers still reson
 Even earlier, through his famous quartet, \citet{anscombe73} qualitatively showed how distancing of researchers from the intricacies of algorithms/methods can lead to misinterpretation of the results.
 One of the earliest such efforts we found was \citet{roberts69} who discussed conventions in FORTRAN programming and documentation to help in publishing research codes.
 
-Another fundamental problem in the design of a project's lineage/workflow is ``workflow decay'' \citep{zhao12}.
-Besides data availability, the ``decay'' in the software tools that the workflow needs is also critical: re-building the full software dependency tree on a random system is very hard.
-Generally, software is not a secular component of projects, where one software can easily be swapped with another.
-Projects are built around specific software technologies, and research in software methods and implementations is itself a vibrant research topic in many domains \citep{dicosmo19}.
-
 In this paper, we introduce Maneage as a solution to the collective problem of preserving a project's data lineage and its software dependencies.
 A project using Maneage will start by branching from the main Git branch of Maneage and starts customizing it: specifying the necessary software tools for that particular project, adding analysis steps and writing a narrative based on the analysis results.
 The temporal provenance of the project is fully preserved in Git, and allows merging of the project with the core branch to update the low-level infra-structure (common to all projects) without changing the high-level steps specific to this project.
@@ -158,25 +139,25 @@ As a consequence, before starting with the technical details it is important to
 
 \begin{enumerate}[label={\bf D\arabic*}]
 \item \label{definition:input}\textbf{Input:}
-  A project's input is any computer file that may be usable in other projects.
+  A project's input is any file that may be usable in other projects.
   The inputs of a project include data or software source code, see \citet{hinsen16} on the fundamental similarity of data and source code.
   Inputs may have initially been created/written (e.g., software source code) or collected (e.g., data) for one specific project, however, they can, and most often will, be used in later projects too.
 
 \item \label{definition:output}\textbf{Output:}
-  A project's output is any computer file that is published at the end.
+  A project's output is any file that is published at the end.
   The output(s) of a project can be a narrative paper or report with visualizations, datasets (e.g., table(s), image(s), a number, or Boolean: confirming a hypothesis as true or false), automatically generated software source code, or any other computer file.
 
 \item \label{definition:project}\textbf{Project:}
   A project is the series of operations that are done on input(s) to produce outputs.
   This definition is therefore very similar to ``workflow'' \citep{oinn04, reich06, goecks10}, but because the published narrative paper/report is also an output, a project also includes the source of the narrative (e.g., \LaTeX{} or MarkDown) \emph{and} how the visualizations in it were created.
 
-  In a good project, all analysis scripts (e.g., written in Python, packages in R, or libraries/programs in C/C++, or etc) are well-defined as an independently managed software with clearly defined inputs and outputs with no side-effects.
+  In a good project, all analysis scripts (e.g., written in Python, packages in R, or libraries/programs in C/C++, or etc) are well-defined as an independently managed software with clearly defined inputs, outputs and no side-effects.
   This greatly helps in debugging and experimentation during the project, and their re-usability in later projects.
   Hence such analysis scripts/programs are defined above as ``inputs'' to the project.
-  A project, as defined here, doesn't include any analysis source code (to the extent possible), it only contains calls to them.
+  A project hence doesn't include any analysis source code (to the extent possible), it only manages calls to them.
 
 \item \label{definition:provenance}\textbf{Data Provenance:}
-  A dataset's provenance is is defined as the set of metadata (in any ontology, standard or structure) that connect it to the components (other datasets or scripts) that produced it.
+  A dataset's provenance is defined as the set of metadata (in any ontology, standard or structure) that connect it to the components (other datasets or scripts) that produced it.
   Data provenance thus provides a high-level \emph{and structured} view of a project's lineage.
   A good example of this is Research Objects \citep{belhajjame15}.
 
@@ -197,11 +178,8 @@ Therefore, data lineage is synonymous with ``project'' as defined above.
   It is important to highlight that in this paper we are only considering computational analysis: \emph{after} data has been collected and stored as a file.
   Therefore, many of the definitions reviewed in \citet{plesser18}, which are about data collection, do not apply here.
   We adopt the same definition of \citet{leek17,fineberg19}, among others.
-  Note that these definitions are contrary some others, for example, the ACM policy guidelines\footnote{\url{https://www.acm.org/publications/policies/artifact-review-badging}} (dated April 2018) and \citet{hinsen15}.
-
   \citet{fineberg19} define reproducibility as \emph{obtaining consistent [not necessarily identical] results using the same input data; computational steps, methods, and code; and conditions of analysis}, or same inputs $\rightarrow$ consistent result.
   They define Replicability as \emph{obtaining consistent results across studies aimed at answering the same scientific question, each of which has obtained its own data}, or different inputs $\rightarrow$ consistent result.
-  Generally, since Replicability involves new data collection \citep[e.g., see][]{kaiser18}.
 \end{enumerate}
 
 
@@ -225,46 +203,42 @@ To highlight the uniqueness of Maneage in this plethora of tools, a more elabora
 
 \begin{enumerate}[label={\bf P\arabic*}]
 \item \label{principle:complete}\textbf{Complete:}
-  A project that is complete, or self-contained, does not depend on anything beyond the Portable operating system Interface (POSIX), does not affect the host system, does not require root/administrator privileges, does not need an internet connection (when its inputs are on the file-system), and is fully recorded and executable in plain-text\footnote{Plain text format does not include document container formats like \inlinecode{.odf} or \inlinecode{.doc}, for software like LibreOffice or Microsoft Office.} format (e.g., ASCII or Unicode).
+  A project that is complete, or self-contained, does not depend on anything beyond the Portable operating system Interface (POSIX), does not affect the host system, does not require root/administrator privileges, does not need an internet connection (when its inputs are on the file-system), and is stored in a format that doesn't require any software beyond POSIX tools to open, parse or execute.
 
   A complete project can automatically access to the inputs (see definition \ref{definition:input}), build its necessary software (instructions on configuring, building and installing those software in a fixed environment), do the analysis (run the software on the data) and create the final narrative report/paper as well as its visualizations, in its final format (usually in PDF or HTML).
   No manual/human interaction is required within a complete project, as \citet{claerbout1992} put it: ``a clerk can do it''.
   Generally, manual intervention in any of the steps above, or an interactive interface, is an incompleteness.
-  Finally, the plain-text format is particularly important because any other storage format will require higher-level software \emph{before} the project.
+  Finally, the plain-text format is particularly important because any other storage format will require specialized software \emph{before} the project can be opened.
 
   \emph{Comparison with existing:} Except for IPOL, none of the tools above are complete.
-  They all have many dependencies far beyond POSIX, for example, the more recent ones are written in Python or use Jupyter notebooks \citep{kluyver16}.
-  Such high-level tools have very short lifespan and evolve very fast, the most recent example was Python 3 that is not compatible with Python 2.
-  They also have a very complex dependency trees, making them extremely vulnerable to updates, for example, see Figure 1 of \citet{alliez19} on the dependency tree of Matplotlib (one of the smaller Jupyter dependencies).
-  The longevity of a data lineage, or workflow (not the analysis itself), is determined by its shortest-lived dependency.
+  They all have many dependencies far beyond POSIX, for example, the more recent ones (the project/workflow, not the analysis) are written in Python or rely on Jupyter notebooks.
+  Such high-level tools have very short lifespans and evolve very fast, for example Python 3 is not compatible with Python 2.
+  They also have a very complex dependency trees, making them extremely vulnerable and hard to maintain, for example, see Figure 1 of \citet{alliez19} on the dependency tree of Matplotlib (one of the smaller Jupyter dependencies).
+  The longevity of a workflow (not the analysis itself), is determined by its shortest-lived dependency.
 
   Many existing tools therefore do not attempt to store the project as plain text, but pre-built binary blobs (containers or virtual machines) that can rarely be recreated\footnote{Using the package manager of the container's OS, or Conda which are both highly dependent on the time they are created.} and also have a short lifespan\footnote{For example Docker only works on Linux kernels that are on long-term support, not older.
     Currently, this is Linux 3.2.x that was initially released 8 years ago in 2012. The current Docker images may not be usable in a similar time frame in the future.}.
-  Once the lifespan of a binary workflow's dependency has passed, it is useless: that binary file cannot be opened to read or executed.
-  But as plain-text, even if it is no longer executable due to much evolved technologies, it is still human read-able and parse-able by any machine.
+  As plain-text, even if it is no longer executable due to much evolved technologies, it is still human read-able and parse-able by any machine.
 
 \item \label{principle:modularity}\textbf{Modularity:}
 A project should be compartmentalized or partitioned to independent modules or components with well-defined inputs/outputs having no side-effects.
 In a modular project, communication between the independent modules is explicit, providing optimizations on multiple levels:
 1) Execution: independent modules can run in parallel, or modules that do not need to be run (because their dependencies have not changed) will not be re-done.
-2) Data lineage and data provenance extraction (recording any dataset's origins).
+2) Data provenance extraction (recording any dataset's origins).
 3) Citation: allowing others to credit specific parts of a project.
-This principle does not just apply to the analysis, it also applies to the whole project, for example, see the definitions of ``input'', ``output'' and ``project'' in Section \ref{sec:definitions}.
+4) Usage in other projects.
 
-\emph{Comparison with existing:} Most are agnostic to modularity: leaving such design choices to the experience of project authors.
-But designing a modular project needs to be encouraged and facilitated, otherwise, scientists (that are not usually trained in data management) will not design their projects to be modular, leading to great inefficiencies in terms of project cost or scientific accuracy.
-Visual workflow tools like Apache Taverna, GenePattern, Kepler or VisTrails do encourage this, but the more recent tools above (which usually require programming) do not.
+\emph{Comparison with existing:} Visual workflow tools like Apache Taverna, GenePattern, Kepler or VisTrails do encourage this, but the more recent tools leaving such design choices to the experience of project authors.
+However, designing a modular project needs to be encouraged and facilitated, otherwise, scientists (that are not usually trained in data management) will not design their projects to be modular, leading to great inefficiencies in terms of project cost or scientific accuracy.
 
 \item \label{principle:complexity}\textbf{Minimal complexity:}
   This principle is essentially Occam's razor: ``Never posit pluralities without necessity'' \citep{schaffer15}, but extrapolated to project management:
   1) avoid complex relations between analysis steps (which is not unrelated to the principle of modularity in \ref{principle:modularity}).
   2) avoid the programming language that is currently in vogue because it is going to fall out of fashion soon and significant resources are required to translate or rewrite it every few years (to stay in vogue).
   The same job can be done with more stable/basic tools, and less effort in the long-run.
-  Unlike software engineers who learn a new tool every two years and do not require long lifespan for their projects, scientists need to focus on their own research domain and are unable to stay up to date with the vogue, creating a generational gap when they do.
-  This is very bad for the scientists: valuable detailed experience cannot pass through generations, or tools have to be re-written at a high cost that could have gone to actual research.
 
   \emph{Comparison with existing:} Most of the existing tools use the language that was in vogue when they were created, for example, a larger fraction of them are written in Python as we come closer to the present time.
-  Again IPOL stands out from the rest in this principle also.
+  Again, IPOL stands out from the rest in this principle.
 
 \item \label{principle:verify}\textbf{Verifiable inputs and outputs:}
 The project should contain automatic verification checks on its inputs (software source code and data) and outputs.
@@ -278,21 +252,21 @@ No project is done in a single/first attempt.
 Projects evolve as they are being completed.
 It is natural that earlier phases of a project are redesigned/optimized only after later phases have been completed.
 This is often seen in scientific papers, with statements like ``we [first] tried method [or parameter] XXXX, but YYYY is used here because it showed to have better precision [or less bias, or etc]''.
-A project's ``history'' is thus as scientifically relevant as the final, or published, snapshot of the project.
+A project's ``history'' is thus as scientifically relevant as the final, or published version.
 
 \emph{Comparison with existing:} The systems above that are implemented around version control usually support this principle.
 However, because they are rarely complete (as discussed in principle \ref{principle:complete}), this history is also not complete.
-IPOL, which uniquely stands out in other principles, fails at this one: only the final snapshot is published.
+IPOL, which uniquely stands out in other principles, fails here: only the final snapshot is published.
 
 \item \label{principle:freesoftware}\textbf{Free and open source software}
   Technically, as defined in Section \ref{definition:reproduction}, reproducibility is also possible with a non-free or non-open-source software (a black box).
   This principle is thus necessary to complement the definition of reproducibility and has many advantages which are critical to the sciences and the industry:
   1) The lineage, and its optimization, can be traced down to the internal algorithm in the software's source.
-  2) A non-free software may not be executable on a given/future hardware, if its free, the project members can modify it to work.
-  3) A non-free software cannot be distributed by the authors, making the whole community reliant only on the proprietary owner's server (even if the proprietary software does not ask for payments), also see Section \ref{sec:publishing}.
+  2) A free software that may not execute on a future hardware can be modified to work.
+  3) A non-free software cannot be distributed by the project, making the whole community reliant only on the proprietary owner's server (even if the proprietary software does not ask for payments).
 
   \emph{Comparison with existing:} The existing solutions listed above are all free software.
-  There are non-free existing solutions too, but we do not consider them here because of this principle.
+  There are non-free lineage or workflow solutions, but we do not consider them here because of this principle.
 \end{enumerate}
 
 
@@ -309,12 +283,12 @@ IPOL, which uniquely stands out in other principles, fails at this one: only the
 
 Maneage is an implementation of the principles of Section \ref{sec:principles}: it is complete (\ref{principle:complete}), modular (\ref{principle:modularity}), has minimal complexity (\ref{principle:complexity}), verifies its inputs \& outputs (\ref{principle:verify}), preserves temporal provenance (\ref{principle:history}) and finally, it is free software (\ref{principle:freesoftware}).
 In practice it is a collection of plain-text files, that are distributed in pre-defined sub-directories by context (a modular source), and are all under version-control, currently with Git.
-The main Maneage Branch is a fully working skeleton of a project without much flesh: containing all the low-level infrastructure, but without any actual high-level analysis operations\footnote{In the core Maneage branch, only a simple demo analysis is included, which can easily be removed (all its files and steps have a \inlinecode{delete-me} prefix).}.
+The main Maneage Branch is a fully working skeleton of a project without much flesh: containing all the low-level infrastructure, but without any actual high-level analysis operations\footnote{In the core Maneage branch, only a simple demo analysis is included to be complete.
+  But it can easily be removed: all its files and steps have a \inlinecode{delete-me} prefix.}.
+Maneage contains a file called \inlinecode{README-hacking.md}\footnote{Note that the \inlinecode{README.md} file is reserved for the project using Maneage, not maneage itself.} that has a complete checklist of steps to start a new project and remove demonstration parts, there are also hands-on tutorials to help new adopters.
 
 To start a new project, the authors will \emph{clone}\footnote{In Git, the ``clone'' operation is the process of copying all the project's files and history from a repository onto the local system.} Maneage, create their own Git branch over the latest commit, and start their project by customizing that branch.
-Customization in their project branch is done by adding the names of the software they need, references to their input data, adding the analysis commands and commands to generate the visualizations, and write the narrative report which includes the visualizations.
-Maneage contains a file called \inlinecode{README-hacking.md} that has a complete checklist of steps to start a new project and remove demonstration parts.
-In order to start using Maneage, there are hands-on tutorials for guiding the reader through research examples and show the workflow in a practical way.
+Customization in their project branch is done by adding the names of the software they need, references to their input data, the analysis commands, visualization commands, and a narrative report which includes the visualizations.
 This will usually be done in multiple commits in the project's duration (maybe multiple years), thus preserving the project's history: the causes of all choices, the authors and times of each change, failed tests, and etc.
 
 Figure \ref{fig:files} shows this directory structure containing the modular plain-text files (classified by context in sub-directories) and some representative files in each directory.
@@ -348,15 +322,14 @@ As seen below, a project's operations are broken-up into two phases: 1) configur
 Here, we will delve deeper into the implementation and some usage details of Maneage.
 Section \ref{sec:usingmake} elaborates why Make (a POSIX tool) was chosen as the main job orchestrator in Maneage.
 Sections \ref{sec:projectconfigure} \& \ref{sec:projectanalysis} then discuss the operations done during the configuration and analysis phase.
-Afterwards, we describe how Maneage projects benefit from version control, during the project's lifetime and after its publication, or end-of-life in Section \ref{sec:projectgit}.
-Section \ref{sec:collaborating} discusses a useful feature of Maneage's modularity principle: sharing built environment and products with multiple project members and Section \ref{sec:publishing} describes the publication/archival features of Maneage.
-Finally, in Section \ref{sec:futurework} we discuss the history and future of Maneage.
+Afterwards, we describe how Maneage projects benefit from version control in Section \ref{sec:projectgit}.
+Section \ref{sec:collaborating} discusses sharing of a built environment and finally, in Section \ref{sec:publishing} the publication/archival of Maneage projects are discussed.
 
 \subsection{Job orchestration with Make}
 \label{sec:usingmake}
 
-When non-interactive, or batch, processing is needed (see Section \ref{principle:complete}), scripts (in Shell, Python, or any other high-level language) are usually the first solution that come to mind.
-However, the inherent complexity and non-linearity of progress in a project (where experimentation is key) is hard to manage the script(s) as the project evolves.
+Scripts (in Shell, Python, or any other high-level language) are usually the first solution that come to mind when non-interactive, or batch, processing is needed (the completeness principle \ref{principle:complete}),
+However, the inherent complexity and non-linearity of progress, as a project evolves, make it hard to manage such scripts.
 For example, if $90\%$ of a research project is done and only the newly added, final $10\%$ must be executed, a script will always start from the beginning.
 It is possible to manually ignore (with conditionals), or manually comment, parts of a script to only do a special part.
 However, such conditionals/comments will only add to the complexity and will discourage experimentation on an already completed part of the project.
@@ -366,34 +339,31 @@ The Make paradigm starts from the end: the final \emph{target}.
 In Make's syntax, the process is broken into atomic \emph{rules} where each rule has a single \emph{target} file which can depend on any number of \emph{prerequisite} files.
 To build the target from the prerequisites, each rule also has a \emph{recipe} (an atomic script).
 The plain-text files containing Make rules and their components are called Makefiles.
-Hence, Make does not replace scripting languages like the shell, Python or R, it is a higher-level structure enabling modular/atomic scripts (in any language) to be put in a workflow.
-The formal connection of targets with prerequisites that is defined in Make, enables creation of a precise lineage as a formal/codified executable system that is very mature and has stood the test of time: Make is actively developed and used in the building of most OS components.
+Note that Make does not replace scripting languages like the shell, Python or R.
+It is a higher-level structure enabling modular/atomic scripts (in any language) to be put in a workflow.
+The formal connection of targets with prerequisites that is defined in Make, enables creation of an optimized workflow that is very mature and has withstood the test of time: almost all OSs rely on it.
 
 Besides formalizing data lineage, Make also greatly encourages experimentation in a project because a recipe is executed only when at least one prerequisite is more recent than its target.
-Therefore, when only $5\%$ of a project's targets are affected by a change, only they will be recreated, the other $95\%$ remain untouched.
+Therefore, when only $5\%$ of a project's targets are affected by a change, only they will be recreated, the other $95\%$ remain dormant.
 Furthermore, Make first examines the full lineage before starting the execution of recipes.
 It can thus execute independent rules in parallel, further improving the speed and encouraging experimentation.
 
 Make is well known by many outside of the software developing communities.
 For example, \citet{schwab2000} report how geophysics students have easily adopted it for the RED project management tool.
-Because of its simplicity, we have also had very good feedback on using Make from the early adopters of Maneage during the last year, in particular, graduate students and postdocs.
-
-\tonote{Mention the non-recursive Make here when discussing \inlinecode{top-make.mk}.}
+Because of its simplicity, we have also had very good feedback on using Make from the early adopters of Maneage since the RDA grant, in particular, with graduate students and postdocs.
 
 \subsection{Project configuration}
 \label{sec:projectconfigure}
 
-Understanding an already built software environment is critical to the understanding/reproducing the result.
-A more robust solution is to to build the software environment from scratch.
-Most existing tools reviewed in Section \ref{sec:principles}, use package managers like Conda, but since conda itself is written in Python, it violates our completeness principle \ref{principle:complete}.
+Maneage orchestrates the building of its necessary software in the same language that it orchestrates the analysis: Make (see Section \ref{sec:usingmake}).
+Therefore, a researcher already using Maneage for their high-level analysis easily understands, and can customize, the software environment too, without delving into the intricacies of third-party tools.
+Most existing tools reviewed in Section \ref{sec:principles}, use package managers like Conda to maintain the software environment, but since conda itself is written in Python, it violates our completeness principle \ref{principle:complete}.
 Highly robust solutions like Nix \citep{dolstra04} and GNU Guix \citep{courtes15} do exist, but they require root permissions which is also against that principle.
-Based on the principles of completeness (\ref{principle:complete}) and minimal complexity (\ref{principle:complexity}) Maneage orchestrates the building of its necessary software in the same language that it orchestrates the analysis: Make (see Section \ref{sec:usingmake}).
-Therefore, a researcher already using Maneage easily understands and can customize the software environment too, without having to learn the intricacies of third-party tools.
 
 Project configuration (building the software environment) is managed by the files under \inlinecode{reproduce\-/soft\-ware} of Maneage's source, see Figure \ref{fig:files}.
 At the start of project configuration, Maneage needs a top-level directory to build itself on the host filesystem (software and analysis).
-We call this the ``build directory'' and it must not be under the source directory (see \ref{principle:modularity}).
-No other location on the running operating system will be affected by the project and it should not affect the result, so its value is not under version control.
+We call this the ``build directory'' and it must not be under the source directory (see \ref{principle:modularity}): by default Maneage will not touch any file in its source.
+No other location on the running operating system will be affected by the project and the build directory should not affect the result, so its value is not under version control.
 Two other local directories can optionally be specified by the project when inputs (\ref{definition:input}) are present locally and do not need to be downloaded: 1) software tarball directory and 2) input data directory.
 Sections \ref{sec:buildsoftware} and \ref{sec:softwarecitation} elaborate more on the building of the necessary software and the important problem of software citation.
 
@@ -401,20 +371,20 @@ Sections \ref{sec:buildsoftware} and \ref{sec:softwarecitation} elaborate more o
 \label{sec:buildsoftware}
 
 To compile the necessary software from source Maneage currently needs the host to have a C compiler (available on any POSIX-compliant OS).
-This C compiler will be used by Maneage to install all necessary meta-software (software to build other software) with fixed versions, this includes GNU Bash, GNU AWK, GNU Coreutils, and many more on all supported operating systems (including macOS).
+This C compiler will be used by Maneage to build and install (in the build directory) all necessary software and their dependencies with fixed versions.
+The dependency tree goes all the way down to core operating system components like GNU Bash, GNU AWK, GNU Coreutils, and many more on all supported operating systems (including macOS, not just GNU/Linux).
 For example, the full list of installed software for this paper is available in Acknowledgments of this paper.
 On GNU/Linux OSs, a fixed version of the GNU Binutils and GNU C Compiler (GCC) is also included, and soon Maneage will also install its own fixed version of the GNU C Library to be fully independent of the host on such systems (Task 15390\footnote{\url{https://savannah.nongnu.org/task/?15390}}).
 In effect, except for the Kernel, Maneage builds all other components of the GNU OS on the host from source.
 
 The software source code may already be present on the host filesystem, if not, they can be downloaded.
-But before being used to build the software, their SHA-512 checksum \citep[part of the SHA-2 algorithms, see][]{romine15} will be checked with the expected checksum in Maneage.
-If the checksums do not match, Maneage will stop and warn the user.
-
-The core operating system components (mostly GNU tools) will be installed in any project, only their versions may differ from one project to another.
-But Maneage also includes a large collection of scientific software (and their dependencies) that are usually not necessary in all projects, each project has to identify its high-level software in its branch, specified in the \inlinecode{TARGETS.conf} file under \inlinecode{re\-produce\-/soft\-ware\-/config} directory, see Figure \ref{fig:files}.
+But before being used to build the software, they will be validated by their SHA-512 checksum (which is already stored in the project).
+Maneage includes a large collection of scientific software (and their dependencies) that are usually not necessary in all projects.
+Therefore, each project has to identify its high-level software in the \inlinecode{TARGETS.conf} file under \inlinecode{re\-produce\-/soft\-ware\-/config} directory, see Figure \ref{fig:files}.
+All the high-level software dependencies are codified in Maneage as Make \emph{prerequisites}, so the specified software will be automatically built after their dependencies, and their dependencies, and etc.
 
-Note that project configuration can be done in a container or virtual machine to avoid having to facilitate moving the project.
-However, the important factor is that such binary blobs are an optional output of Maneage, they are not the only way a project using Maneage can be archived.
+Note that project configuration can be done in a container or virtual machine to facilitate moving the project.
+However, the important factor is that such binary blobs are an optional output of Maneage, they are not the its primary storage/archival format.
 
 \subsubsection{Software citation}
 \label{sec:softwarecitation}
@@ -423,19 +393,18 @@ Maneage contains the full list of built software for each project, their version
 However, this information is buried deep into each project's source.
 Maneage also prints a distilled fraction of this information in the project's final report, blended into the narrative, as seen in the Acknowledgments of this paper.
 Furthermore, when the software is associate with a published paper, that paper's Bib\TeX{} entry is also added to the final report and is cited with the software's name and version.
-This is particularly important in the case for research software, where the researcher has invested significant time in building the software, and requires official citation to justify continued work on it.
+For example\footnote{In this paper we have used very basic tools that aren't accompanied by a paper}, see the software acknowledgement sections of \citet{akhlaghi19} and \citet{infante20}.
 
+This is particularly important in the case for research software, where citation is critical to justify continued development.
 One notable example that nicely highlights this issue is GNU Parallel \citep{tange18}: every time it is run, it prints the citation information before it starts.
 This does not cause any problem in automatic scripts, but can be annoying when reading/debugging the outputs.
 Users can disable the notice, with the \inlinecode{--citation} option and accept to cite its paper, or support its development directly by paying $10000$ euros!
 This is justified by an uncomfortably true statement\footnote{GNU Parallel's FAQ on the need to cite software: \url{http://git.savannah.gnu.org/cgit/parallel.git/plain/doc/citation-notice-faq.txt}}: ``history has shown that researchers forget to [cite software] if they are not reminded explicitly. ... If you feel the benefit from using GNU Parallel is too small to warrant a citation, then prove that by simply using another tool''.
-In bug 905674\footnote{Debian bug on the citation notice of GNU Parallel: \url{https://bugs.debian.org/cgi-bin/bugreport.cgi?bug=905674}}, the Debian developers argued that because of this extra condition, GNU Parallel should not be considered as free software, and they are using a patch to remove that part of the code for its build under Debian-based OSs.
 Most other research software do not resort to such drastic measures, however, citation is important for them.
-Given the increasing number of software used in scientific research, the only reliable solution is to automatically cite the used software in the final paper.
 
+Given the increasing number of software used in scientific research, the only reliable solution is to automatically cite the used software in the final paper.
 For a review of the necessity and basic elements in software citation, see \citet{katz14} and \citet{smith16}.
-There are ongoing projects specifically tailored to software citation, including CodeMeta (\url{https://codemeta.github.io}) and Citation file format (CFF: \url{https://citation-file-format.github.io}).
-Another robust approach is provided by SoftwareHeritage \citep{dicosmo18}.
+There are ongoing projects specifically tailored to software citation, including CodeMeta\footnote{\url{https://codemeta.github.io}} and Citation file format\footnote{\url{https://citation-file-format.github.io}} (CFF), a very robust approach is also provided by SoftwareHeritage \citep{dicosmo18}.
 We plan to enable these wonderful tools in Maneage.
 
 
@@ -447,20 +416,21 @@ We plan to enable these wonderful tools in Maneage.
 
 Once the project is configured (Section \ref{sec:projectconfigure}), a unique and fully controlled environment is available to execute the analysis.
 All analysis operations run such that the host OS settings cannot penetrate it, enabling an isolated environment without the extra layer of containers or a virtual machine.
-In Maneage, a project's analysis is broken into two phases: data preparation and analysis.
-The former is mostly necessary in special situations where the datasets are extremely large and some initial preparation needs to be done on them to avoid slowing down the whole project in each run.
-That phase is organized in an identical manner as the analysis phase, so we will not go into it any further here and refer the interested reader to the documentation of Maneage.
+In Maneage, a project's analysis is broken into two phases: 1) preparation and 2) analysis.
+The former is mostly necessary to optimize for extremely large datasets and is only useful for advanced users, it also follows an identical internal structure to the later.
+Hence, we will not go into it any further and refer the interested reader to the documentation.
 
-A project consists of many steps, including data access (possibly by downloading), running various steps of the analysis on the obtained data, and creating the necessary plots, figures or tables for a published report, or output datasets for a database.
+A project consists of many steps, including data access (possibly by downloading), running various steps of the analysis on the raw inputs, and creating the necessary plots, figures or tables for a published report, or output datasets for a database.
 If all of these steps are organized in a single Makefile, it will become very large, or long, and will be hard to maintain, extend/grow, read, reuse, and cite.
 Generally, large files are a bad practice and against the modularity principle (\ref{principle:modularity}).
 
-Maneage is thus designed to encourage and facilitate modularity by distributing the analysis in many Makefiles that contain contextually-similar (or modular) analysis steps.
+Maneage is thus designed to encourage and facilitate modularity by distributing the analysis in many Makefiles that contain contextually-similar analysis steps.
 In the rest of this paper these modular, or lower-level, Makefiles will be called \emph{subMakefiles}.
-When run with the \inlinecode{make} argument, the \inlinecode{project} script (Section \ref{sec:maneage}), calls the \inlinecode{top-make.mk} Makefile that is in \inlinecode{re\-produce\-/anal\-ysis\-/make}.
-The subMakefiles are loaded into \inlinecode{top-make.mk} in a certain order and executed in one instance of Make without recursion (recursion is against the minimal complexity principle, \ref{principle:complexity}).
-The subMakefiles are located in the same directory as \inlinecode{top-make.mk}, see Figure \ref{fig:files}.
-Figure \ref{fig:datalineage} schematically shows these subMakefiles and their relation with each other through their targets.
+The subMakefiles are loaded into the special Makefile \inlinecode{top-make.mk} with a certain order and executed in one instance of Make\footnote{The subMakefiles are loaded into \inlinecode{top-make.mk} using Make's \inlinecode{include} directive.
+  Hence no recursion is used (where one instance of Make, calls Make within itself) because recursion is against the minimal complexity principle and can make the code very hard to read \ref{principle:complexity}.}.
+When run with the \inlinecode{make} argument, the \inlinecode{project} script (Section \ref{sec:maneage}), calls \inlinecode{top-make.mk}.
+All these Makefiles are in \inlinecode{re\-produce\-/anal\-ysis\-/make}, see Figure \ref{fig:files}.
+Figure \ref{fig:datalineage} schematically shows these subMakefiles and their relation with each other with the targets they build.
 
 \begin{figure}[t]
   \begin{center}
@@ -478,39 +448,39 @@ Figure \ref{fig:datalineage} schematically shows these subMakefiles and their re
   }
 \end{figure}
 
-To avoid getting too abstract in the subsections below, where necessary, we will do a basic analysis on the data of \citet[data were published as supplementary material on bioXriv]{menke20} and replicate one of their results.
-Note that because we are not using the same software, this is not a reproduction (\ref{definition:reproduction}).
-We cannot use the same software because they use Microsoft Excel for the analysis which violates several of our principles: \ref{principle:complete}, \ref{principle:complexity} and \ref{principle:freesoftware}.
+To avoid getting too abstract in the subsections below, where necessary, we will do a basic analysis on the data of \citet{menke20} and replicate one of their results.
+Note that because we are not using the same software\footnote{We cannot use the same software because \citet{menke20} use Microsoft Excel for the analysis which violates several of our principles: \ref{principle:complete}, \ref{principle:complexity} and \ref{principle:freesoftware}.}, this is not a reproduction (see \ref{definition:reproduction}).
 In the subsections below, this paper's analysis on that dataset is described using the data lineage graph of Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}.
-We will follow Make's paradigm (see Section \ref{sec:usingmake}) of starting form the ultimate target in Section \ref{sec:paperpdf}, and tracing backwards in its lineage to the configuration files \ref{sec:configfiles}.
+We will follow Make's paradigm (see Section \ref{sec:usingmake}) of starting the lineage backwards form the ultimate target in Section \ref{sec:paperpdf} (bottom of Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}) to the configuration files \ref{sec:configfiles} (top of Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}).
+To better understand this project, we encourage looking into this paper's Maneage source, published as a supplement.
 
 \subsubsection{Ultimate target: the project's paper or report (\inlinecode{paper.pdf})}
 \label{sec:paperpdf}
 
-The ultimate purpose of a project is to report the data analysis result, as raw visualizations of the results or blended in with a narrative description.
+The ultimate purpose of a project is to report the data analysis result, as raw visualizations, or numbers blended in with a narrative.
 In Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}, it is shown as \inlinecode{paper.pdf}. Note that it is the only built file (blue box) with no arrows leaving it.
 The instructions to build \inlinecode{paper.pdf} are in the \inlinecode{paper.mk} subMakefile.
 Its prerequisites include \inlinecode{paper.tex} and \inlinecode{references.tex} (Bib\TeX{} entries for possible citations) in the project source and \inlinecode{project.tex} which is a built product.
-\inlinecode{references.tex} is also an important component of Maneage because it formalizes the connections of this project with previous projects on a high-level.
+\inlinecode{references.tex} formalizes the connections of this project with previous projects on a high-level.
 
 \subsubsection{Values within text (\inlinecode{project.tex})}
 \label{sec:valuesintext}
 
-Figures, plots, tables and narrative are not the only analysis output that goes into the paper.
+Figures, plots, tables and narrative are not the only analysis products that are included in the paper/report.
 In many cases, quantitative values from the analysis are also blended into the sentences of the report's narration.
-For example, note this sentence in the abstract of \citet[which is written in Maneage]{akhlaghi19}: ``... detect the outer wings of M51 down to S/N of 0.25 ...''.
-The signal-to-noise ratio (S/N) value ``0.25'' depends on the analysis, and is an output of the analysis just like paper's figures and plots.
-Manually typing such numbers in the narrative is prone to very important bugs: the author may forget to check it after a change in an analysis (e.g., using a newer version of the software, or changing an analysis parameter for another part of the paper).
-Given the non-linear evolution of a scientific projects, this type of human error is very hard to avoid and can discourage experimentation.
-Therefore, such values must also be automatically generated.
+For example, this sentence in the abstract of \citet[which is written in Maneage]{akhlaghi19}: ``... detect the outer wings of M51 down to S/N of 0.25 ...''.
+The value `0.25', for signal-to-noise ratio (S/N), depends on the analysis, and is an output of the analysis just like paper's figures and plots.
+Manually typing such numbers in the narrative is prone to very important errors and discourages testing in scientific papers.
+Therefore, they must also be automatically generated.
 
 To automatically generate and blend them in the text, Maneage uses \LaTeX{} macros.
-In the quote above, the \LaTeX{} source\footnote{\citet{akhlaghi19} uses this template to be reproducible, so its \LaTeX{} source is available in multiple ways: 1) direct download from arXiv:\href{https://arxiv.org/abs/1909.11230}{1909.11230}, by clicking on ``other formats'', or 2) the Git or \href{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3408481}{zenodo.3408481} links is also available on arXiv.} looks like this: ``\inlinecode{\small detect the outer wings of M51 down to S/N of \$\textbackslash{}demo\-sf\-optimized\-sn\$}''.
-The ma\-cro ``\inlinecode{\small\textbackslash{}demosfoptimizedsn}'' is automatically calculated and recorded during in the project and expands to the value ``\inlinecode{0.25}''.
+In the quote above, the \LaTeX{} source\footnote{\citet{akhlaghi19} is written in Maneage and its \LaTeX{} source is available in multiple ways: 1) direct download from arXiv:\href{https://arxiv.org/abs/1909.11230}{1909.11230}, by clicking on ``other formats'', or 2) the Git or \href{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3408481}{zenodo.3408481}, links is also available on arXiv's top page.} looks like this: ``\inlinecode{\small detect the outer wings of M51 down to S/N of \$\textbackslash{}demo\-sf\-optimized\-sn\$}''.
+T\-he ma\-cro ``\inlinecode{\small\textbackslash{}demosfoptimizedsn}'' is automatically created during in the project and expands to the value ``\inlinecode{0.25}'' when the PDF output is built.
 The built \inlinecode{project.tex} file stores all such reported values.
 
 However, managing all the necessary \LaTeX{} macros in one file is against the modularity principle and can be frustrating and buggy.
 To address this problem, Maneage has the convention that all subMakefiles \emph{must} contain a fixed target with the same base-name, but with a \inlinecode{.tex} suffix to store reported values generated in that subMakefile.
+If it doesn't need to report any values in text, the file can be empty.
 In Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}, these macro files can be seen in every subMakefile, except for \inlinecode{paper.mk} (which does not need it).
 These \LaTeX{} macro files thus form the core skeleton of a Maneage project: as shown in Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}, the outward arrows of all built files of any subMakefile ultimately leads to one of these \LaTeX{} macro files, possibly in another subMakefile.
 
@@ -520,28 +490,18 @@ These \LaTeX{} macro files thus form the core skeleton of a Maneage project: as
 Before the modular \LaTeX{} macro files of Section \ref{sec:valuesintext} are merged into the single \inlinecode{project.tex} file, they need to pass through the verification filter, which is a core principle of Maneage (\ref{principle:verify}).
 Note that simply confirming the checksum of the final PDF, or figures and datasets is not generally possible: many tools write the creation date into the produced files.
 To avoid such cases the raw data (independent of their metadata like creation date) must be verified, some standards have such features, for example, the \inlinecode{DATASUM} keyword in the FITS format \citep{pence10}.
-
-To facilitate output verification, the project has a \inlinecode{verify.mk} subMakefile, see Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}.
-It is \inlinecode{verify.tex} the only prerequisite of \inlinecode{project.tex} that was described in Section \ref{sec:valuesintext} and is the boundary between the analytical phase of the paper, and the production of the report.
+To facilitate output verification, the project has a \inlinecode{verify.mk} subMakefile (see Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}) and \inlinecode{verify.tex} the only prerequisite of \inlinecode{project.tex} that was described in Section \ref{sec:valuesintext}.
+Verification is the boundary between the analytical phase of the paper, and the production of the report.
 It has some tests on pre-defined formats, and other formats can easily be added.
-Prior to publication, the project authors should add the MD5 checksums of all the\LaTeX{} macro files and output datasets in the recipe of \inlinecode{verify\-.tex} to enable automatic verification by readers afterwards.
-
-\subsubsection{Project initialization (\inlinecode{initialize.mk})}
-\label{sec:initialize}
-
-The \inlinecode{initial\-ize\-.mk} subMakefile is present in all projects and is the first subMakefile that is loaded into \inlinecode{top-make.mk} (see Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}).
-Project authors rarely need to modify/edit this file, it is a low-level infrastructure of Maneage, but are encouraged to do so.
-\inlinecode{initial\-ize\-.mk} does not contain any analysis or major processing steps, it just initializes the system by setting the necessary Make environment as well as other general jobs like defining the Git commit hash of the run as a \LaTeX{} (\inlinecode{\textbackslash{}projectversion}) macro that can be loaded into the narrative.
-Papers using Maneage usually put this hash as the last word in their abstract, for example, see \citet{akhlaghi19} and \citet{infante20}, for the current version of this paper, it expands to \projectversion.
 
 \subsubsection{The analysis}
 \label{sec:analysis}
 
 The basic concepts behind organizing the analysis into modular subMakefiles has already been discussed above, we will thus describe it here with the practical example of replicating Figure 1C of \citet{menke20}, with some enhancements in Figure \ref{fig:toolsperyear}.
-As shown in Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}, in the customized branch of this project, we have broken this goal into two subMakefiles: \inlinecode{format.mk} and \inlinecode{demo-plot.mk}.
+As shown in Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}, in this project, we have broken this goal into two subMakefiles: \inlinecode{format.mk} and \inlinecode{demo-plot.mk}.
 The former is in charge of converting the Microsoft Excel formatted input into the simple comma-separated value (CSV) format, and the latter is in charge of generating the table to build Figure \ref{fig:toolsperyear}.
 In a real project, subMakefiles will be much more complex.
-Figure \ref{fig:topmake} shows how the two subMakefiles are thus placed as values to the \inlinecode{makesrc} variable of \inlinecode{top-make.mk}, without their suffix\footnote{Because the \LaTeX{} macro file will also be generated from the values to \inlinecode{makesrc} with the \inlinecode{.tex} suffix, see Section \ref{sec:valuesintext}.}.
+Figure \ref{fig:topmake} shows how the two subMakefiles are thus placed as values to the \inlinecode{makesrc} variable of \inlinecode{top-make.mk}, without their suffix (see Section \ref{sec:valuesintext}).
 Note that their location after the standard starting subMakefiles (initialization and download) and before the standard ending subMakefiles (verification and final paper) is important, as well as the order.
 
 \begin{figure}[t]
@@ -562,31 +522,27 @@ Note that their location after the standard starting subMakefiles (initializatio
   }
 \end{figure}
 
-Figure \ref{fig:toolsperyear} also shows the number of papers that were studied each year (that is not shown in the original plot).
-Its horizontal axis shows the full range of the data (starting from \menkefirstyear) while the original Figure 1C in \citet{menke20} starts from 1997.
+To enhance the original plot, Figure \ref{fig:toolsperyear} also shows the number of papers that were studied each year.
+Its horizontal axis also shows the full range of the data (starting from \menkefirstyear) while the original Figure 1C in \citet{menke20} starts from 1997.
 Probably, the reason \citet{menke20} decided to avoid earlier years was the small number of papers in earlier years.
 For example, in \menkenumpapersdemoyear, they had only studied \menkenumpapersdemocount{} papers.
 Note that both the numbers of the previous sentence (\menkenumpapersdemoyear{} and \menkenumpapersdemocount), and the dataset's oldest year (mentioned above: \menkefirstyear) are automatically generated \LaTeX{} macros, see \ref{sec:valuesintext}.
 We did not typeset them in this narrative explanation manually.
 This step (generating the macros) is shown schematically in Figure \ref{fig:datalineage} with the arrow from \inlinecode{tools-per-year.txt} to \inlinecode{demo-plot.tex}.
 
-To create Figure \ref{fig:toolsperyear}, we used the \LaTeX{} package PGFPlots, therefore, the final analysis output we needed was a simple plain-text table with 3 columns.
-This table is shown in the lineage graph of Figure \ref{fig:datalineage} as \inlinecode{tools-per-year.txt}.
+To create Figure \ref{fig:toolsperyear}, we used the \LaTeX{} package PGFPlots, therefore, the final analysis output we needed was a simple plain-text table with 3 columns (year, paper per year, tool fraction per year).
+This table is shown in the lineage graph of Figure \ref{fig:datalineage} as \inlinecode{tools-per-year.txt} and The PGFPlots source to generate this figure is located in \inlinecode{tex\-/src\-/figure\--tools\--per\--year\-.tex}.
 If another plotting tool was desired (for example Python's Matplotlib, or Gnuplot), the built graphic file (for example \inlinecode{tools-per-year.pdf}) could be the target instead of the raw table.
 
 The \inlinecode{tools-per-year.txt} is a value-added table with only \menkenumyears{} rows (counting per year), the original dataset had \menkenumorigrows{} rows (one row for each year of each journal).
-In the Make rule to build, it is in \inlinecode{demo-plot.mk} and its recipe is a simple GNU AWK command, with \inlinecode{menke20-table-3.txt} as its prerequisite, it is schematically shown by the arrow connecting the two \inlinecode{.txt} files.
+We see in Figure \ref{fig:datalineage} that it is defined as a Make \emph{target} in \inlinecode{demo-plot.mk} and that its prerequisite is \inlinecode{menke20-table-3.txt} (schematically shown by the arrow connecting them).
 Note that both the row numbers mentioned at the start of this paragraph are also macros.
-The latter (\menkenumorigrows{}) is schematically shown with the arrow from \inlinecode{menke20-table-3.txt} to \inlinecode{format.tex}.
-
-Ultimately, the first file we need to operate on is \inlinecode{menke20-table-3.txt} (which is defined as a target in \inlinecode{format.mk}).
-As mentioned before, the main operation here is to convert the Microsoft Excel format of the downloaded dataset (\inlinecode{menke20.xlsx}, discussed below in Section \ref{sec:download}) to this simple plain-text format for the operations mentioned above.
-We do this job with the XLSX I/O program that has been specified as software to build during project configuration.
-This step is shown schematically in Figure \ref{fig:datalineage} with the arrow connecting these two lines.
+Again from Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}, we see that \inlinecode{menke20-table-3.txt} is a target in \inlinecode{format.mk} and its prerequisite is the input file \inlinecode{menke20.xlsx}.
+The input files (which come from outside the project) are all \emph{targets} in \inlinecode{download.mk} and futher discussed in Section \ref{sec:download}.
 
 Having prepared the full dataset in a simple format, let's report the number of subjects (papers and journals) that were studied in \citet{menke20}.
-The necessary file for this measurement is \inlinecode{menke20-table-3.txt} that is a target in \inlinecode{format.mk}.
-Therefore, we do this calculation (with a simple AWK command) and write the results in (\inlinecode{format.tex}).
+The necessary file for this measurement is \inlinecode{menke20-table-3.txt}.
+Therefore, we do this calculation (with a simple AWK command) and write the results in \inlinecode{format.tex} which is automatically loaded into this paper's source along with the macro files.
 In the built PDF paper, the two macros expand to $\menkenumpapers$ (number of papers studied) and $\menkenumjournals$ (number of journals studied) respectively.
 This step is shown schematically in Figure \ref{fig:datalineage} with the arrow from \inlinecode{menke20-table-3.txt} to \inlinecode{format.tex}.
 
@@ -626,37 +582,37 @@ Figure \ref{fig:inputconf} shows the corresponding \inlinecode{INPUTS.conf} wher
 
 The subMakefiles discussed above should only contain the organization of an analysis, they should not contains any fixed numbers, settings or parameters.
 Such elements should only be used as variables that are defined in configuration files.
+Configuration files enable the logical separation between the low-level implementation and high-level running of a project.
 In the data lineage plot of Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}, configuration files are shown as the sharp-edged, green \inlinecode{*.conf} files in the top row.
+For example the \inlinecode{INPUTS.conf} file that was shown in Figure \ref{fig:inputconf} and mentioned in Section \ref{sec:download}.
+All the configuration files of a project are placed under the \inlinecode{reproduce/analysis/config} (see Figure \ref{fig:files}) subdirectory, and are loaded into \inlinecode{top-make.mk} before any of the subMakefiles, see Figure \ref{fig:topmake}.
 
 The demo analysis of Section \ref{sec:analysis} is a good demonstration of their usage: during that discussion we reported the number of papers studied by \citet{menke20} in \menkenumpapersdemoyear.
 However, the year's number is not written by hand in \inlinecode{demo-plot.mk}.
 It is referenced through the \inlinecode{menke-year-demo} variable, which is defined in \inlinecode{menke-demo-year.conf}, that is a prerequisite of the \inlinecode{demo-plot.tex} rule.
 This is also visible in the data lineage of Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}.
-If we later decide to report the number of paper in another year, we simply have to change the value in \inlinecode{menke-demo-year.conf}.
-Since the configuration file's date will be newer than \inlinecode{demo-plot.tex}, the recipe to generate the macro file will be be re-executed, and the corresponding year and value will be updated in this paper.
+If we later decide to report the number in another year, we simply have to change the value in \inlinecode{menke-demo-year.conf}.
+A configuration file is a prerequisite of the target that uses it, hence its date will be newer than \inlinecode{demo-plot.tex}.
+Therefore Make will re-execute the recipe to generate the macro file before this paper is re-built and the corresponding year and value will be updated in this paper, always in synchronization with each other and no matter how many times they are used.
+Combined with the fact that all source files in Maneage are under version-controlled, this encourages testing of various analysis settings as the project is evolving, leading to more robust scientific results.
 
-All the configuration files of a project are placed under the \inlinecode{reproduce/analysis/config} (see Figure \ref{fig:files}) subdirectory, and are loaded into \inlinecode{top-make.mk} before any of the subMakefiles, see Figure \ref{fig:topmake}.
-The configuration files greatly simplify project management from multiple perspectives as listed below:
-
-\begin{itemize}
-\item If an analysis parameter is used in multiple places within the project, simply changing the value in the configuration file will change it everywhere in the project.
-  This is cortical in more complex projects and if not done like this can lead to significant human error.
-\item Configuration files enable the logical separation between the low-level implementation and high-level running of a project.
-  For example, after writing the project, the authors do not need to remember where the number/parameter was used, they can just modify the configuration file.
-  Other co-authors, or readers, of the project also benefit: they just need to know that there is a unified place for high-level project settings, parameters, or numbers without necessarily having to know the low-level implementation.
-\item A configuration file will be a prerequisite to any rule that uses its value.
-  If the configuration file is updated (the value/parameter is changed), Make will automatically detect the data lineage branch that is affected by it and re-execute only that branch, without any human interference.
-\end{itemize}
+\subsubsection{Project initialization (\inlinecode{initialize.mk})}
+\label{sec:initialize}
+
+The \inlinecode{initial\-ize\-.mk} subMakefile is present in all projects and is the first subMakefile that is loaded into \inlinecode{top-make.mk} (see Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}).
+It does not contain any analysis or major processing steps, it just initializes the system by setting the necessary Make environment as well as other general jobs like defining the Git commit hash of the run as a \LaTeX{} (\inlinecode{\textbackslash{}projectversion}) macro that can be loaded into the narrative.
+Papers using Maneage usually put this hash as the last word in their abstract, for example, see \citet{akhlaghi19} and \citet{infante20}.
+For this version of this paper, it expands to \projectversion.
 
 \subsection{Projects as Git branches of Maneage}
 \label{sec:projectgit}
 
-Maneage is fully composed of plain-text files, therefore, it can be maintained under version control systems like Git.
+Maneage is fully composed of plain-text files, therefore, it can be maintained under version control systems (currently using Git).
 Every commit in the version controlled history contains \emph{a complete} snapshot of the data lineage, for more, see the completeness principle (\ref{principle:complete}).
 Maneage is maintained by its developers in a central branch, which we will call \inlinecode{man\-eage} hereafter.
 The \inlinecode{man\-eage} branch contains all the low-level infrastructure, or skeleton, that is necessary for any project as described in the sections above.
 As mentioned in Section \ref{sec:maneage}, to start a new project, users simply clone it from its reference repository and build their own Git branch over the most recent commit.
-This is demonstrated in the first phase of Figure \ref{fig:branching} where a project has started by branching off of commit \inlinecode{0c120cb} (in the \inlinecode{maneage} branch).
+This is demonstrated in the first phase of Figure \ref{fig:branching} where a project has started by branching-off of commit \inlinecode{0c120cb} in the \inlinecode{maneage} branch.
 
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-After a project starts, Maneage will evolve.
-For example, new features will be added, low-level bugs will be fixed that are useful for any project.
-Because all the changes in Maneage are committed on the \inlinecode{maneage} branch, and all projects branch-off from it, updating the project's low-level infra-structure is as easy as merging the \inlinecode{maneage} branch into the project's branch.
+After a project starts, Maneage will evolve, for example, new features will be added or low-level bugs will be fixed.
+Because all projects branch-off from the same branch that these infrastructure improvements are made, updating the project's low-level skeleton is as easy as merging the \inlinecode{maneage} branch into the project's branch.
 For example, in Figure \ref{fig:branching} (phase 1), see how Maneage's \inlinecode{3c05235} commit has been merged into project's branch trough commit \inlinecode{2ed0c82}.
 
-This does not just apply to the pre-publication phase, when done in Maneage, a project can be revived at any later date by other researchers as shown in phase 2 of Figure \ref{fig:branching}.
-In that figure, a new team of researchers have decided to experiment on the results of the published paper and have merged it with the Maneage branch (commit \inlinecode{a92b25a}) to fix some possible portability problem for their operating system that was fixed as a bug in Maneage after the paper's publication.
+Another useful scenario is reviving a finished/published project at later date, by other researchers as shown in phase 2 of Figure \ref{fig:branching}.
+In that figure, a new team of researchers have decided to experiment on the results of the published paper and have merged it with the Maneage branch (commit \inlinecode{a92b25a}) to make it usable for their system (e.g., assming the original project was completed years ago, and is no longer directly executable).
 
 Other scenarios include a third project that can easily merge various high-level components from different projects into its own branch, thus adding a temporal dimension to their data lineage.
-Modern version control systems provide many more capabilities that can be leveraged through Maneage in project management, thanks to the shared branch it has with \emph{all} projects that use it and that it is complete (\ref{principle:complete}).
+Modern version control systems provide many more capabilities that can be leveraged through Maneage in project management, thanks to the shared branch it has with \emph{all} derived projects, and that it is complete (\ref{principle:complete}).
 
 \subsection{Multi-user collaboration on single build directory}
 \label{sec:collaborating}
 
 Because the project's source and build directories are separate, it is possible for different users to share a build directory, while working on their own separate project branches during a collaboration.
 Similar to the parallel branch that is later merged in phase 1 of Figure \ref{fig:branching}.
-
-To give all users privilege, Maneage assumes that they are in the same (POSIX) user group of the system.
-All files built in the build directory are then automatically assigned to this user group.
-The \inlinecode{./project} script has a special \inlinecode{--group} option which activates this mode in both configuration and analysis phases.
-It takes the user group name as its argument and the built files will only be accessible by the group members, even when the shared location is accessible by people outside the project.
+To enable this mode, \inlinecode{./project} script has a special \inlinecode{--group} option which takes the name of a (POSIX) user group in the host operating system.
+All files built in the build directory are then automatically assigned to this user group, with read and write permissions.
+Ofcourse, avoiding conflicts in the build directory, while members are working on different branches is up to the team.
 
 \subsection{Publishing the project}
 \label{sec:publishing}
 
-Once the project is complete, publishing the project is the final step.
+Once the project is complete it needs to be published.
 In a scientific scenario, it is submitted to a journal, and an industrial world, it is submitted to the customers or employers.
-As discussed in the various steps before, the source of the project (the software configuration, data lineage and narrative text) is fully in plain text, greatly facilitating the publication of the project.
-
-\subsubsection{Automatic creation of publication tarball}
-\label{sec:makedist}
-To facilitate the publication of the project source, Maneage has a special \inlinecode{dist} target during the build process which is activated with the command \inlinecode{./project make dist}.
+To facilitate the publication of the project's source, Maneage has a special \inlinecode{dist} target during the build process which is activated with the command \inlinecode{./project make dist}.
 In this mode, Maneage will not do any analysis, it will simply copy the full project's source (on the given commit) into a temporary directory and compress it into a \inlinecode{.tar.gz} file.
 If a Zip compression is necessary, the \inlinecode{dist-zip} target can be called instead \inlinecode{dist}.
+Since complete project is in plain-text, this compressed file is usually on the scale of 100 kilobytes.
 
-\subsubsection{What to publish, and where?}
-\label{sec:whatpublish}
-The project's source, which is fully in hand-written plain-text, has a very small volume, usually much less than one megabyte.
 However, the necessary inputs (\ref{definition:input}) and outputs may be arbitrarily large, from megabytes to petabytes or more.
-Therefore, there are various scenarios for the publication of the project as described below:
-
-\begin{itemize}
-\item \textbf{Only source:} Publishing the project source is very easy because it only contains plain-text files with a very small volume: a commit will usually be on the scale of $\times100kB$. With the Git history, it will usually only be on the scale of $\sim5MB$.
-
-  \begin{itemize}
-  \item \textbf{Public Git repository:} This is the simplest publication method.
-    The project will already be on a (private) Git repository prior to publication.
-    In such cases, the private configuration can be removed so it becomes public.
-  \item \textbf{In journal or PDF-only preprint systems (e.g., bioRxiv):} If the journal or pre-print server allows publication of small supplement files to the paper, the project source can be submitted as a supplement.
-  \item \textbf{arXiv:} arXiv will run its own internal \LaTeX{} engine on the uploaded files and produce the PDF that is published.
-    When the project is published, arXiv also allows users to anonymously download the \LaTeX{} source tarball that the authors uploaded.
-    Therefore, simply uploading the tarball from the \inlinecode{./project make dist} command is sufficient.
-    We done this in \citet[arXiv:1909.11230]{akhlaghi19} and \citet[arXiv:1911.01430]{infante20}.
-    Since arXiv is mirrored in many institutes over the planet, this is a robust way to preserve the reproducible lineage.
-  \item \textbf{In output datasets:} Many data storage formats support an internal structure with the data file.
-    One commonly used example today is the Hierarchical Data Format (HDF) and, in particular, its HDF5 which can host a complex filesystem in POSIX syntax.
-  \end{itemize}
-\item \textbf{Source and data:} The project inputs (including the software tarballs, or possible datasets) may have a large volume.
-  Publishing them with the source is thus not always possible.
-  However, based on the definition of inputs in Section \ref{definition:input}, they are usable in other projects: another project may use the same data or software source code, in a different way.
-  Therefore, even when published with the source, it is encouraged to publish them as separate files.
-
-  For example, this strategy was followed in \href{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3408481}{zenodo.3408481}\footnote{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3408481} which supplements \citet{akhlaghi19} and contains the following files.
-
-  \begin{itemize}
-  \item \textbf{Final PDF:} for easy understanding of the project.
-  \item \textbf{Git history:} as the Git ``bundle'' of the project.
-    This single file contains the full Git history of the project until its publication date (only 4Mb), see Section \ref{sec:starting}.
-  \item \textbf{Project source tarball}: output of \inlinecode{./project make dist}, as explained above.
-  \item \textbf{Tarballs of all necessary software:} This is necessary in case the software webpages is not accessible for any reason at a later date or the project must be run with no internet access.
-    This is only possible because of the free software principle discussed in Section \ref{principle:freesoftware}.
-  \end{itemize}
-
-  Note that \citet{akhlaghi19} used previously published datasets which are automatically accessed when necessary.
-  Besides, that paper did not produce any output datasets beyond the figures shown in the report, therefore, the Zenodo upload does not contain any datasets.
-  When a project involves data collection, or added-value data products, they can also be uploaded with the files above.
-\end{itemize}
-
-\subsubsection{Worries about getting scooped!}
-\label{sec:scooped}
-Publishing the project source with the paper can have many benefits for the researcher and the larger community.
-For example, if the source is published with a pre-print, others my help the authors find bugs, or improvements to the source that can affect the validity or precision of the result, or simply optimize it, so it does the same work in half the time.
-
-However, one particular feedback raised by a minority of researchers is that publishing the project's reproducible data lineage immediately after publication may hamper their ability to continue harvesting from all their hard work.
-Because others can easily reproduce the work, others may take the next follow-up project they originally intended to do.
-This is informally known as getting scooped.
-
-The level that this may happen is an interesting subject to be studied once many papers become reproducible.
-But it is a valid concern that must be addressed.
-Given the strong integrity checks in Maneage, we believe it has features to address this problem in the following ways:
-1) Through the Git history, it is clear how much extra work the other team has added.
-In this way, Maneage can contribute to a new concept of authorship in scientific projects and help to quantify Newton's famous ``standing on the shoulders of giants'' quote.
-However, this is a long term goal and requires major changes to academic value systems.
-2) Authors can be given a grace period where the journal, or some third authority, keeps the source and publishes it a certain time after publication.
+Therefore, there are various scenarios for the publication of the project: 1) only publishing the source, 2) publishing the source with the data.
+In the former case, the output of \inlinecode{dist} (described above) can be submitted to the journal as a supplement, or uploaded to pre-print servers like arXiv that will actually compile the \LaTeX{} source and build their own PDFs.
+The Git history can also be archived as a single ``bundle'' file and also submitted as a supplement.
+When publishing with datasets, the project's outputs, and inputs (if necessary), can be published on servers like Zenodo.
+For example in \citet{akhlaghi19}, along with the source files mentioned above, we also uploaded all the project's necessary software and its final PDF to Zenodo in \href{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3408481}{zenodo.3408481}\footnote{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3408481}.
+
+
+
+
+
+
 
-\subsection{Future of Maneage and its past}
-\label{sec:futurework}
-
-As with any software, the core architecture of Maneage will inevitably evolve after the publication of this paper.
-The current version introduced here has already experienced 5 years of evolution and several reincarnations.
-Its primordial implementation was written for \citet{akhlaghi15}.
-This paper described a new detection algorithm in astronomical image processing.
-The detection algorithm was developed as the paper was being written (initially a small report!).
-An automated sequence of commands to build the figures, and update the paper/report was a practical necessity as the algorithm was evolving.
-In particular, it did not just reproduce figures, it also used \LaTeX{} macros to update numbers printed within the text.
-Finally, since the full analysis pipeline was in plain-text and roughly 100kb (much less than a single figure), it was uploaded to arXiv with the paper's \LaTeX{} source, under a \inlinecode{reproduce/} directory, see \href{https://arxiv.org/abs/1505.01664}{arXiv:1505.01664}\footnote{
-  To download the \LaTeX{} source of any arXiv paper, click on the ``Other formats'' link, containing necessary instructions and links.}.
 
-The system later evolved in \citet{bacon17}, in particular, the two sections of that paper that were done by M. Akhlaghi (first author of this paper): \citet[\href{http://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.1163746}{zenodo.1163746}]{akhlaghi18a} and \citet[\href{http://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.1164774}{zenodo.1164774}]{akhlaghi18b}.
-With these projects, the skeleton of the system was written as a more abstract ``template'' that could be customized for separate projects.
-The template later matured by including installation of all necessary software from source and used in \citet[\href{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3408481}{zenodo.3408481}]{akhlaghi19} and \citet[\href{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3524937}{zenodo.3524937}]{infante20}.
-The short historical review above highlights how this template was created by practicing scientists, and has evolved and matured significantly.
 
-We already have roughly 30 tasks that are left for the future and will affect various high-level phases of the project as described here.
-However, the core of the system has been used and become stable enough already and we do not see any major change in the core methodology in the near future.
-A list of the notable changes after the publication of this paper will be kept in the project's \inlinecode{README-hacking.md} file.
-Once the improvements become substantial, new paper(s) will be written to complement or replace this one.
 
 \section{Discussion}
 \label{sec:discussion}
 
+Maneage is the final product of various research projects (in astrophysics) over the last 5 years.
+The primordial implementation was written for the analysis of \citet{akhlaghi15}.
+Since the full analysis pipeline was in plain-text and consumed much less space than a single figure, it was uploaded to arXiv with the paper's \LaTeX{} source, see \href{https://arxiv.org/abs/1505.01664}{arXiv:1505.01664}\footnote{
+  To download the \LaTeX{} source of any arXiv paper, click on the ``Other formats'' link, containing necessary instructions and links.}.
+The system later evolved in \citet{bacon17}, in particular, the two sections of that paper that were done by M. Akhlaghi: \href{http://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.1163746}{zenodo.1163746} and \href{http://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.1164774}{zenodo.1164774}.
+With these projects, the skeleton of the system was written as a more abstract ``template'' that could be customized for separate projects.
+That template later matured into Maneage by including the installation of all necessary software from source and it was used in \citet[\href{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3408481}{zenodo.3408481}]{akhlaghi19} and \citet[\href{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.3524937}{zenodo.3524937}]{infante20}.
+
+In the last year and with the Research Data Alliance (RDA) grant that was awarded to Maneage, its user base (and thus its development) grew phenomenally and it has evolved to become much more customizable, well-tested and well-documented.
+But it is far from complete: its core architecture will continue evolve after the publication of this paper, therefore a list of the notable changes after the publication of this paper will be kept in the \inlinecode{README-hacking.md} file.
+
+Based on user input, we have seen the following caveats for Maneage.
+The first caveat is regarding its widespread adoption: by principle, it uses very low-level tools like Git, \LaTeX, Make and command-line tools to run in non-interactive mode.
+We understand that a very large fraction of the scientific community are accustomed to interactive graphic user interface (GUI) tools.
+Thanks to the RDA grant, we have had the chance to introduce Maneage to several early career researchers and the feedback we have got was very promising: most were simply not familiar with any of these tools.
+After seeing them in action together (as a \emph{complete} Maneage project) they have started using and enjoying them.
+Unfortunately by their low-level nature, their documentation alone is directly useful for scientists.
+Based on this positive feedback, we thus working on several tutorials and scientist-friendly documentation of such tools for usage in Maneage.
+
+A second caveat is the fact that Maneage is effectively a distribution of the GNU operating system, tailored to each project, but built ontop of an existing POSIX-compatible operating system, but not using its environment.
+Maneage has many generic scripts for simplifying the software packaging.
+However, maintaining them (updating versions or fixing bugs on some hosts) can take time and is annoying for a small team.
+Because package management (Section \ref{sec:projectconfigure}) is in the same language as analysis, some users have learnt to package their necessary software tools themselves.
+They later send those additions as merge-requests to the core Maneage branch, making them available to any future project.
+With a larger user-base we hope the fraction of such volunteers increases and decreases the burden.
+
+Another caveat that has been raised by some is that publishing the project's reproducible data lineage immediately after publication may hamper their ability to continue harvesting from all their hard work.
+Given the strong integrity checks in Maneage, we believe it has features to address this problem in the following ways:
+1) Through the Git history, it is clear how much extra work the other team has added.
+In this way, Maneage can contribute to a new concept of authorship in scientific projects and help to quantify Newton's famous ``standing on the shoulders of giants'' quote.
+However, this is a long term goal and requires major changes to academic value systems.
+2) Authors can be given a grace period where the journal, or some third authority, keeps the source and publishes it a certain time after publication.
+
 \section{Summary and conclusion}
 \label{sec:conclusion}
 
 
 %% Acknowledgements
 \section{Acknowledgments}
-The authors wish to thank Pedram Ashofteh Ardakani, Elham Saremi, Zahra Sharbaf and Surena Fatemi for their useful suggestions and feedback on Maneage and this paper and to David Valls-Gabaud, Ignacio Trujillo, Johan Knapen, Roland Bacon for their support.
+The authors wish to thank David Valls-Gabaud, Konrad Hinsen, Yahya Sefidbakht, Pedram Ashofteh Ardakani, Elham Saremi, Zahra Sharbaf and Surena Fatemi for their useful suggestions and feedback on Maneage and this paper and to Ignacio Trujillo, Johan Knapen, Roland Bacon for their support.
 We also thank Julia Aguilar-Cabello for designing the Maneage logo.
-
-Work on the reproducible paper template has been funded by the Japanese Ministry of Education, Culture, Sports, Science, and Technology ({\small MEXT}) scholarship and its Grant-in-Aid for Scientific Research (21244012, 24253003), the European Research Council (ERC) advanced grant 339659-MUSICOS, European Union’s Horizon 2020 research and innovation programme under Marie Sklodowska-Curie grant agreement No 721463 to the SUNDIAL ITN, and from the Spanish Ministry of Economy and Competitiveness (MINECO) under grant number AYA2016-76219-P.
-The reproducible paper template was also supported by European Union’s Horizon 2020 (H2020) research and innovation programme via the RDA EU 4.0 project (ref. GA no. 777388).
+During its development, Maneage has been partially funded (in historical order) by the following institutions:
+The Japanese Ministry of Education, Culture, Sports, Science, and Technology ({\small MEXT}) PhD scholarship to M.A and its Grant-in-Aid for Scientific Research (21244012, 24253003).
+The European Research Council (ERC) advanced grant 339659-MUSICOS.
+The European Union’s Horizon 2020 (H2020) research and innovation programmes No 777388 under RDA EU 4.0 project, and Marie Sk\l{}odowska-Curie grant agreement No 721463 to the SUNDIAL ITN network.
+The State Research Agency (AEI) of the Spanish Ministry of Science, Innovation and Universities (MCIU) and the European Regional Development Fund (FEDER) under the grant with reference AYA2016-76219-P.
+The IAC project P/300724, financed by the Ministry of Science, Innovation and Universities, through the State Budget.
+The Canary Islands Department of Economy, Knowledge and Employment, through the Regional Budget of the Autonomous Community.
+The Fundaci\'on BBVA under its 2017 programme of assistance to scientific research groups, for the project "Using machine-learning techniques to drag galaxies from the noise in deep imaging".
 
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