Updated principles section

The principles section was made more clear.

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     \begin{itemize}
     \item \textbf{Complete/self-contained:}
       \begin{itemize}
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-      \item The project's \alert{only dependencies} should be \alert{POSIX} \textcolor{gray}{(discards Conda or Jupyter which need Python)}.
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-      \item Project's source should be in \alert{plain-text}: a binary format neeeds special software.
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-      \item Should be \alert{non-interactive} or runnable in batch (user interaction is an incompleteness).
+      \item \alert{Only dependency} should be \alert{POSIX} tools \textcolor{gray}{(discards Conda or Jupyter which need Python)}.
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       \item Must \alert{not require root} permissions \textcolor{gray}{(discards tools like Docker or Nix/Guix)}.
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-      \item Should \alert{not require internet} connection.
+      \item Should be \alert{non-interactive} or runnable in batch (user interaction is an incompleteness).
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-      \item \alert{Version control} (e.g., with Git) can track project's history.
+      \item Should be usable \alert{without internet} connection.
       \end{itemize}
 
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     \item \textbf{Modularity:} Parts of the project should be \alert{re-usable} in other projects.
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-    \item \textbf{Minimal complexity:} Occum’s rasor: “Never posit pluralities without necessity”.
+    \item \textbf{Plain text:} Project's source should be in \alert{plain-text} \textcolor{gray}{(binary formats need special software)}
       \begin{itemize}
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-      \item Avoiding the \alert{fashionable} tool of the day (other tools can also do the job).
+      \item This includes high-level analysis.
+      \item It is easily publishable (very low volume of $\times100$KB), archivable, and parse-able.
+      \item \alert{Version control} (e.g., with Git) can track project's history.
+      \end{itemize}
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+    \item \textbf{Minimal complexity:} Occum’s rasor: “Never posit pluralities without necessity”.
+      \begin{itemize}
+      \item Avoiding the \alert{fashionable} tool of the day: tomorrow another tool will take its place!
       \item Easier \alert{learning curve}, also doesn't create a \alert{generational gap}.
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       \item Is \alert{compatible} and \alert{extensible}.
       \end{itemize}
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     \item \textbf{Verifable inputs and outputs:} Inputs and Outputs must be \alert{automatically verified}.
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-    \item \textbf{Free and open source software:} \alert{Free software} is essential: non-free software is not tracable, not configurable, not distributable, dependent on non-free provider.
+    \item \textbf{Free and open source software:} \alert{Free software} is essential: non-free software is not configurable, not distributable, and dependent on non-free provider (which may discontinue it in N years).
     \end{itemize}
   \end{frame}