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 %% ANY WARRANTY; without even the implied warranty of MERCHANTABILITY or
 %% FITNESS FOR A PARTICULAR PURPOSE.  See the GNU General Public License
 %% for more details. See <http://www.gnu.org/licenses/>.
-\section{Necessity for reproducible research\\(not submitted to journal, here for basic review)}
+\section{Necessity for reproducible research\\(not part of journal article; introductory review for non-specialists)}
 \label{appendix:necessity}
 
 The increasing volume and complexity of data analysis has been highly productive, giving rise to a new branch of ``Big Data'' in many fields of the sciences and industry.
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 %% A short appendix describing this file.
 \begin{abstract}
-  This supplement contains appendices to accompany the body of the published paper on CiSE (pre-print published on \href{https://arxiv.org/abs/\projectarxivid}{\texttt{arXiv:\projectarxivid}} or \href{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.\projectzenodoid}{\texttt{zenodo.\projectzenodoid}}).
-  In the paper's main body we discussed criteria for longevity and introduced a proof of concept that implements them called Maneage (\emph{Man}aging data lin\emph{eage}).
-  However, due to the journal word-count limit we could not include a thorough literature review to emphasis on all the valuable lessons learnt from previous methods or compare them (and their lower-level tools) in sufficient detail to the criteria or the proof-of-concept presented in this work.
-  Appendix \ref{appendix:existingtools} reviews the low-level tools that used by many (reproducible) workflow solutions (including our proof of concept).
-  Appendix \ref{appendix:existingsolutions} reviews many solutions that attept(ed) reproducible management of workflows (including solutions that have been abandonded, discontinued, or unavailable any more).
-  To highlight the evolving landscape and its effects on longevity, Appendix \ref{appendix:existingsolutions}  discusses them in historical order.
-  Finally, in Appendix \ref{appendix:software} an automatically generated, and exaustive, list of software used to build this project is included with their versions.
-  This supplement was built over project commit \projectversion.
+  This supplement contains appendices to the main body of the published paper on CiSE (pre-print published on \href{https://arxiv.org/abs/\projectarxivid}{\texttt{arXiv:\projectarxivid}} or \href{https://doi.org/10.5281/zenodo.\projectzenodoid}{\texttt{zenodo.\projectzenodoid}}).
+  In the paper's main body we discussed criteria for longevity and introduced a proof of concept that implements them, called Maneage (\emph{Man}aging data lin\emph{eage}).
+  This supplement provides an in-depth literature review of previous methods and compares them and their lower-level tools in detail with our criteria and with the proof of concept presented in this work.
+  Appendix \ref{appendix:existingtools} reviews the low-level tools that are used by many reproducible workflow solutions (including our proof of concept).
+  Appendix \ref{appendix:existingsolutions} reviews many solutions that attempt(ed) reproducible management of workflows (including solutions that have stopped development, or worse, are no longer available online).
+  To highlight the evolving landscape and its effects on longevity, Appendix \ref{appendix:existingsolutions}  discusses the solutions in historical order.
+  Finally, in Appendix \ref{appendix:software} an automatically generated, exhaustive list of software used to build this project is included with the software versions indicated.
+  This supplement was built from project commit \projectversion.
 \end{abstract}
 
 %% Import the appendices.