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\section{Conclusion \& Summary}
\label{sec:conclusion}
-To effectively leverage the power of big data, we need to have a complete view of its lineage.
-Scientists are however rarely trained sufficiently in data management or software development, and the plethora of high-level tools that change every few years does not help.
+To effectively leverage the scientific power of big data, we need to have a complete view of its lineage.
+Scientists are, however, rarely trained sufficiently in data management or software development, and the plethora of high-level tools that change every few years does not help.
Such high-level tools are primarily targetted at software developers, who are paid to learn them and use them effectively for short-term projects.
-Scientists on the other hand need to focus on their own research fields, and need to think about longevity.
+Scientists, on the other hand, need to focus on their own research fields, and need to think about longevity.
-Maneage is designed as a complete template, providing scientists with a built low-level skeleton, using simple and robust tools that have withstood the test of time while being actively developed.
-Scientists can customize its existing data management for their own projects, enabling them to learn and master the lower-level tools in the meantime.
-This improves their efficiency and the robustness of their scientific result, while also enabling future scientists to reproduce and build-upon their work.
+Maneage is designed as a complete template, providing scientists with a pre-built low-level skeleton, using simple and robust tools that have withstood the test of time and are actively maintained.
+Scientists can customize Maneage's existing data management for their own projects, enabling them to learn and master the lower-level tools.
+This improves their efficiency and the robustness of their scientific results, while also enabling future scientists to reproduce and build upon their work.
-We discussed the founding principles of Maneage that are completeness, modularity, minimal complexity, verifiable inputs and outputs, temporal provenance, and free software.
-We showed how these principles are implemented in an already built structure, ready for customization and discussed the caveats and advantages of this implementation.
-With a larger user-base and wider application in scientific (and hopefully industrial) applications, Maneage will certainly grow and become even more robust, stable and user friendly.
+We discussed the founding principles of Maneage that are completeness, modularity, minimal complexity, verifiable inputs and outputs, temporal provenance, scalability, and free software.
+We showed how these principles are implemented in an existing structure, ready for customization, and discussed its advantages and disadvantages.
+With a larger user-base and wider application in scientific (and hopefully industrial) applications, Maneage will grow and become even more robust, stable and user friendly.