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authorBoud Roukema <boud@cosmo.torun.pl>2020-05-23 17:31:48 +0200
committerMohammad Akhlaghi <mohammad@akhlaghi.org>2020-05-23 23:18:08 +0100
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Main text: implement most of David's changes
This commit implements most of David's changes from c76727b, but excluding some, such as the proposal to use 'which' in a restrictive clause in the abstract. This is allowed, but the Fowler brothers' rule tends to followed in science writing: https://ell.stackexchange.com/questions/5/is-there-any-difference-between-which-and-that A few points on the abstract: * an immediate solution = singular * The "immediate, fast short-term" benefits sentence sounded like it was redundantly superfluously repetitively repeating doubled-up information. Hopefully this edit is better. * in the %Conclusion, "solutions" is vague, like people who say "technology" when they're only talking about software, so this edit reminds the reader to make the sentence more self-contained and understandable.
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