Cherry-pick 7bf5fcd to make merging easier

This series of commits aims to edit sections II+III,
but first implements the changes from 7bf5fcd, apart
from one that conflicts in the abstract: this commit
has ``Maneage'' without `(managing+lineage)` in the
abstract.

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   %% AIM
   We aim to introduce a set of criteria to address this problem and to demonstrate their practicality.
   %% METHOD
-  The criteria have been tested in several research publications and can be summarized as: completeness (no dependency beyond a POSIX-compatible operating system, no administrator privileges, no network connection, and storage primarily in plain text); modular design; linking analysis with narrative; temporal provenance; scalability; and free-and-open-source software.
+  The criteria have been tested in several research publications and can be summarized as: completeness (no dependency beyond a POSIX-compatible operating system, no administrator privileges, no network connection and storage primarily in plain text); modular design; linking analysis with narrative; temporal provenance; scalability; and free-and-open-source software.
   %% RESULTS
   Through an implementation, called ``Maneage'', we find that storing the project in machine-actionable and human-readable plain-text, enables version-control, cheap archiving, automatic parsing to extract data provenance, and peer-reviewable verification.
   Furthermore, we find that these criteria are not limited to long-term reproducibility, but also provide immediate benefits for short-term reproducibility.