Minor edits suggested by David and updating of Zenodo DOI

David made suggested some minor edits that are now implemented (most
importantly that he would not like to be associated with an ORCID ID).

I also "saved" a new Zenodo DOI for the final submission of this paper to
Zenodo, but "after" obtaining the page number information and other minor
things.

3 files changed, 17 insertions, 17 deletions

diff --git a/paper.tex b/paper.tex
index 9685600..f670950 100644
--- a/paper.tex
+++ b/paper.tex
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@
 \ifdefined\separatesupplement
 as supplementary ``Web extras'' on the journal web page.
 \else
-after main body of paper (Appendices \ref{appendix:existingtools} and \ref{appendix:existingsolutions}).
+after the main body of this paper (Appendices \ref{appendix:existingtools} and \ref{appendix:existingsolutions}).
 \fi
 
   \vspace{2.5mm}
@@ -644,9 +644,9 @@ The Pozna\'n Supercomputing and Networking Center (PSNC) computational grant 314
   He is the corresponding author of this article.
   His ORCID ID is \href{https://orcid.org/0000-0003-1710-6613}{0000-0003-1710-6613}.
   For this article he is affiliated with:
-  1) Instituto de Astrof\'isica de Canarias, C/V\'ia L\'actea, 38200. La Laguna, Tenerife, Spain.
-  2) Facultad de F\'isica, Universidad de La Laguna, Avda. Astrofísico Fco. S\'anchez s/n, 38200. La Laguna, Tenerife, Spain.
-  3) Univ Lyon, Ens de Lyon, Univ Lyon1, CNRS, Centre de Recherche Astrophysique de Lyon UMR5574, F-69007, Lyon.
+  1) Instituto de Astrof\'isica de Canarias, C/V\'ia L\'actea, 38205. La Laguna, Tenerife, Spain.
+  2) Facultad de F\'isica, Universidad de La Laguna, Avda. Astrofísico Fco. S\'anchez s/n, 38205. La Laguna, Tenerife, Spain.
+  3) Univ Lyon, Ens de Lyon, Univ Lyon1, CNRS, Centre de Recherche Astrophysique de Lyon UMR5574, 69007, Lyon.
   For more details visit \url{https://akhlaghi.org}.
   Contact him at mohammad@akhlaghi.org.
 \end{IEEEbiographynophoto}
@@ -656,8 +656,8 @@ The Pozna\'n Supercomputing and Networking Center (PSNC) computational grant 314
   He received the M.Sc. degree from the University of Granada, Granada, Spain.
   His ORCID ID is \href{https://orcid.org/0000-0002-6220-7133}{0000-0002-6220-7133}.
   For this article he is affiliated with:
-  1) Instituto de Astrof\'isica de Canarias, C/V\'ia L\'actea, 38200. La Laguna, Tenerife, Spain.
-  2) Facultad de F\'isica, Universidad de La Laguna, Avda. Astrofísico Fco. S\'anchez s/n, 38200. La Laguna, Tenerife, Spain.
+  1) Instituto de Astrof\'isica de Canarias, C/V\'ia L\'actea, 38205. La Laguna, Tenerife, Spain.
+  2) Facultad de F\'isica, Universidad de La Laguna, Avda. Astrofísico Fco. S\'anchez s/n, 38205. La Laguna, Tenerife, Spain.
   For more details visit \url{https://infantesainz.org}.
   Contact him at infantesainz@gmail.com.
 \end{IEEEbiographynophoto}
@@ -668,7 +668,7 @@ The Pozna\'n Supercomputing and Networking Center (PSNC) computational grant 314
   His ORCID ID is \href{https://orcid.org/0000-0002-3772-0250}{0000-0002-3772-0250}.
   For this article he is affiliated with:
   1) Institute of Astronomy, Faculty of Physics, Astronomy and Informatics, Nicolaus Copernicus University, Grudziadzka 5, 87-100 Torun, Poland.
-  2) Univ Lyon, Ens de Lyon, Univ Lyon1, CNRS, Centre de Recherche Astrophysique de Lyon UMR5574, F-69007, Lyon, France.
+  2) Univ Lyon, Ens de Lyon, Univ Lyon1, CNRS, Centre de Recherche Astrophysique de Lyon UMR5574, 69007, Lyon, France.
   Contact him at boud@astro.uni.torun.pl.
 \end{IEEEbiographynophoto}
 
@@ -676,17 +676,16 @@ The Pozna\'n Supercomputing and Networking Center (PSNC) computational grant 314
   is currently the Backend Technical Services Manager at Ideal-Information, Muscat, Oman.
   He received the M.Sc. degree in theoretical particle physics from Yazd University, Yazd, Iran.
   His ORCID ID is \href{https://orcid.org/0000-0002-8236-809X}{0000-0002-8236-809X}.
-  For this article he is affiliated with:
-  1) Ideal-Information, PC 133 Al Khuwair, PO Box 1886, Muscat, Oman.
+  For this article he is affiliated with
+  Ideal-Information, PC 133 Al Khuwair, PO Box 1886, Muscat, Oman.
   Contact him at mkhellat@ideal-information.com.
 \end{IEEEbiographynophoto}
 
 \begin{IEEEbiographynophoto}{David Valls-Gabaud}
   is a CNRS Research Director at LERMA, Observatoire de Paris, France.
-  He received the degrees from the Universities of Madrid, Paris and Cambridge, and the Ph.D. degree in 1991.
-  His ORCID id is \href{https://orcid.org/0000-0002-9821-2911}{0000-0002-9821-2911}.
-  For this article, he is affiliated with:
-  1) Paris Observatory, 26914 Paris, \^Ile-de-France, France.
+  He studied at the Universities of Madrid, Paris and Cambridge, and obtained his Ph.D. degree in 1991.
+  For this article, he is affiliated with
+  LERMA, CNRS UMR 8122, Paris Observatory, 75014 Paris, France.
   Contact him at david.valls-gabaud@observatoiredeparis.psl.eu.
 \end{IEEEbiographynophoto}
 
@@ -695,7 +694,7 @@ The Pozna\'n Supercomputing and Networking Center (PSNC) computational grant 314
   He was a Postdoc with Instituto de Astrof\'isica de Canarias (IAC), Spain.
   He received a degree from the University of Seville, Seville, Spain and a Ph.D. degree from the University of Barcelona, Barcelona, Spain.
   His ORCID id is \href{https://orcid.org/0000-0001-5214-7408}{0000-0001-5214-7408}.
-  For this article, he is affiliated with:
+  For this article, he is affiliated with
   Universidad Internacional de La Rioja (UNIR), Gran V\'ia Rey Juan Carlos I, 41. 26002 Logro\~no, La Rioja, Spain.
   Contact him at roberto.baena@unir.net.
 \end{IEEEbiographynophoto}
diff --git a/reproduce/analysis/config/metadata.conf b/reproduce/analysis/config/metadata.conf
index b1f657b..c544000 100644
--- a/reproduce/analysis/config/metadata.conf
+++ b/reproduce/analysis/config/metadata.conf
@@ -29,7 +29,7 @@ metadata-title = Towards Long-term and Archivable Reproducibility
 # 'https://doi.org/' or 'https://arxiv.org/abs'), they will be added
 # automatically where necessary.
 metadata-arxiv          = 2006.03018
-metadata-doi-zenodo     = 10.5281/zenodo.4291207
+metadata-doi-zenodo     = 10.5281/zenodo.4913277
 metadata-doi-journal    = 10.1109/MCSE.2021.3072860
 metadata-doi            = $(metadata-doi-journal)
 metadata-git-repository = http://git.maneage.org/paper-concept.git
diff --git a/tex/src/appendix-existing-tools.tex b/tex/src/appendix-existing-tools.tex
index 0e69be1..d636f36 100644
--- a/tex/src/appendix-existing-tools.tex
+++ b/tex/src/appendix-existing-tools.tex
@@ -353,10 +353,11 @@ Even though both source code and data are ultimately just a series of bits in a
 Source code is often written by humans, for machines to execute \emph{and also} humans to read/modify; they are often composed of many files and thousands of lines of (modular) code, often the fine details of the history of the changes in those lines are also preserved though version control as mentioned in Appendix \ref{appendix:versioncontrol}.
 
 For example, the source-code files for a research paper can also be archived on a preprint server such as arXiv\footnote{\inlinecode{\url{https://arXiv.org}}}, which pioneered the archiving of research pre-prints.
-ArXiv only requires the {\LaTeX} source of a paper (and its plots) to build the paper internally and provide users with Postscript or PDF outputs: having access to the {\LaTeX} source, allows it to extract metadata like bibliography for example.
+ArXiv uses the {\LaTeX} source of a paper (and its plots) to build the paper internally and provide users with Postscript or PDF outputs: having access to the {\LaTeX} source, allows it to extract metadata or contextual information among other benefits\footnote{\inlinecode{\url{https://arxiv.org/help/faq/whytex}}}.
 However, along with the {\LaTeX} source, authors can also submit any type of plain-text file, including Shell or Python scripts for example (as long as the total volume of the upload doesn't exceed a certain limit, currently 50MB).
 This feature of arXiv is heavily used by Maneage'd papers.
-For example this paper is available at \href{https://arxiv.org/abs/2006.03018}{arXiv:2006.03018}; by clicking on ``Other formats'', and then ``Download source'', the full source file that we uploaded is available to any interested reader (it includes a full snapshot of Maneage at the point the paper was built, including all software and narrative source code).
+For example this paper is available at \href{https://arxiv.org/abs/2006.03018}{arXiv:2006.03018}; by clicking on ``Other formats'', and then ``Download source'', the full source file that we uploaded is available to any interested reader.
+This file includes a full snapshot of this Maneage'd project at the point the paper was submitted there, including all software and narrative source code.
 Infact the \inlinecode{./project make dist} command in Maneage will automatically create the arXiv-ready tarball for authors to upload easily.
 ArXiv provides long-term stable URIs, giving unique identifiers for each publication\footnote{\inlinecode{\url{https://arxiv.org/help/arxiv_identifier}}} and is mirrored on many severs across the globe.