4.3.1 Project analysis - paper.pdf

Only 3 words are reduced in this commit, but I think the
improvements are worth it.

"Note that" and "It is worth mentioning" are phrases still quite
often used by academics (even in astronomy) that can be politely
described as "pontification" or informally as "empty blabla";
these add no meaning except "I am teaching you something and I
expect you to pay attention to what I am saying". :) There are
also less polite descriptions.

1 files changed, 2 insertions, 2 deletions

diff --git a/paper.tex b/paper.tex
index e866635..ae2d45d 100644
--- a/paper.tex
+++ b/paper.tex
@@ -488,10 +488,10 @@ To better understand this project, we recommend study of this paper's own Maneag
 \label{sec:paperpdf}
 
 The ultimate purpose of a project is to report the data analysis result, as raw visualizations, or numbers blended in with a narrative.
-In Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}, this is \inlinecode{paper.pdf}. Note that it is the only built file (blue box) with no outwards arrows leaving it.
+In Figure \ref{fig:datalineage}, this is \inlinecode{paper.pdf}, which is the only built file (blue box) with no outwards arrows leaving it.
 The instructions to build \inlinecode{paper.pdf} are in the \inlinecode{paper.mk} subMakefile.
 Its prerequisites include \inlinecode{paper.tex} and \inlinecode{references.tex} (Bib\TeX{} entries for possible citations) in the project source and \inlinecode{project.tex} which is a built product.
-\inlinecode{references.tex} formalizes the connections of this project with previous projects on a higher level.
+The high-level connections of this project with previous projects are formalized by \inlinecode{references.tex}.
 
 \subsubsection{Values within text (\inlinecode{project.tex})}
 \label{sec:valuesintext}