From 2ddfb42f4655633c5bdac6b32c6fb1f52181b031 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Raul Infante-Sainz <infantesainz@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 3 Jan 2021 19:03:49 +0000
Subject: Minor corrections to the existing tools appendix

With this commit, I have corrected some minor typos of this appendix. In
addition to that, I also put empty lines to separate subsections and
subsubsections appropiately (5 lines and 1 line, respectively).
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 1 file changed, 2 insertions(+), 2 deletions(-)

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@@ -268,7 +268,7 @@ The derivation ``history'' of a result is thus not any the less valuable as itse
 \textbf{Criterion 7: Including narrative that is linked to analysis.}
 A project is not just its computational analysis.
 A raw plot, figure, or table is hardly meaningful alone, even when accompanied by the code that generated it.
-A narrative description is also a deliverable (defined as ``data article'' in \cite{austin17}): describing the purpose of the computations, interpretations of the result, and the context concerning other projects/papers.
+A narrative description is also a deliverable (defined as ``data article'' in \cite{austin17}): describing the purpose of the computations, interpretations of the result, and the context in relation to other projects/papers.
 This is related to longevity, because if a workflow contains only the steps to do the analysis or generate the plots, in time it may get separated from its accompanying published paper.
 
 \textbf{Criterion 8: Free and open-source software:}
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ They are reliant on a single supplier (even without payments) \new{and prone to
 A project that is \href{https://www.gnu.org/philosophy/free-sw.en.html}{free software} (as formally defined by GNU), allows others to run, learn from, \new{distribute, build upon (modify), and publish their modified versions}.
 When the software used by the project is itself also free, the lineage can be traced to the core algorithms, possibly enabling optimizations on that level and it can be modified for future hardware.
 
-\new{Propietary software may be necessary to read private data formats produced by data collection hardware (for example micro-arrays in genetics).
+\new{Propietary software may be necessary to read proprietary data formats produced by data collection hardware (for example micro-arrays in genetics).
 In such cases, it is best to immediately convert the data to free formats upon collection, and archive (e.g., on Zenodo) or use the data in free formats.}
 
 
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